***Excerpt from “SECRETS” to be released Nov 7th 2015

Why do you hate mom so much Nessa? I’ll tell you why Carl, because every man that has ever cared about me, she ran them away. She made dad leave when she could have forgiven him, he made a mistake that’s all it’s not like she’s never made a mistake before. God knows I know one mistake in particular!

The whole time Nessa is talking Lisa is waiting patiently to say her piece. She thought it might be helpful for Nessa to get everything off her chest. Then she would finally tell her children the truth about their father. She never wanted to tarnish their father’s reputation in their eyes especially now that he was dead. Now she’s had no choice because she still had Wayne and Fats to get through high school, so if Nessa no longer wanted to be bothered then so be it, but she was not willing to sacrifice her other children behind Nessa’s scornful attitude.

Nessa is still saying her piece; “She could have let him come back home, then she ran Uncle Jordan away because she made Aunt Rachel mad, when she sent Uncle Jordan over to Uncle Joe’s house instead of calling the police and now ……. I told ya’ll that I liked him that I wanted ya’ll to meet him and the whole time she said nothing. She could have let us know he was our brother, what about that Carl, why couldn’t she tell us he was our brother, all those years, he was right here in the same City with us. Suppose we had been romantically involved imagine how that would have felt. With all the other issues, I got going on; imagine dealing with the fact that I kissed my brother. Well it’s time for me to have some payback mother. You hurt me and now I’m going to let you feel a little pain, and I say a little because if I told what I’ve known since I was twelve years old ya’ll be …. You know what it don’t even matter. Everybody has been so curious about who the father of my baby is, well I’ll tell you. (Walks towards her mother and when she gets directly in front of her mother) The father of my baby is Mr.……

When the words Mr. comes out of Ness’s mouth everybody’s mouth drops to the floor and Lisa’s eyes begin to squint and spew fire. Lisa begins to brace herself for what she already knew Nessa was going to say.  “Mr. Williams is the father of my baby, what you think about that mother, you’ve finally had no say so in who cares abo………… Smaaack!!!!! Lisa smacks Nessa in her face so hard that she fell over the chair and on to the floor, where she knew better than to get up. The other kids did not move a muscle or say a word! Lisa is beyond pissed, “You little slut, why in the world would you sleep with a forty something year old man? My God Nessa what kind of person are you?

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***A Family in Crisis “SECRETS Coming Nov 7th 2015***

Good Evening all my 2nd book A Family in Crisis “SECRETS” will be available for your reading pleasure… That being said picture this… Lisa is in the hospital and suddenly a visitor appears in her doorway. They say do u remember me? Lisa is stunned to see this person and begins to look visibly annoyed and afraid, annoyed because of what this person represented, a very dark period in her life and afraid because this person can reveal the SECRET she has kept for the last 18 years and cause her to answer questions she was not prepared to answer. Lisa says yes I know who you are and the she says something that pisses her visitor off and causes the visitor to cease with the chitchat. The visitor in a very serious tone tells Lisa that if she did not tell her children they had another sibling they were going to blow her world up!!! If you were Lisa what would you do next???

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*** SECRETS , SECRETS, SECRETS,*** COMING NOV 7TH, 2014

ImageWhile your reading the 2nd installment in the, “A Family in Crisis” Quadrilogy  “SECRETS” U will say Damn, this is BS, Hell no, that …Is wicked, ruthless, U mean ..Is the daddy, Lord why did …Have to die, that’s so sad oh Lord, You mean … is Nessa sibling, How could that heifer be so evil, and I can’t believe Lisa did that. A white man??? Lord have mercy, Thank God she’s okay and after you have said all those things and more you have to get ready for the third installment “THE TRUTH” UMPH, UMPH, UMPH!!! Remember I warned you!!!

***TELL YOU WHAT I’M GOING TO DO***

Tell you what I’m going to do, for the next couple of days I’m going to drop the price of A Family in Crisis the Story of Nessa for those who meant to buy the book but somehow got distracted to $15.00 on Amazon or you can get an Autograph copy from me for the same price but you will pay no taxes or shipping fees, I will ship to directly to you. I love my Nessa fans and want all to get a chance to read a book like none they’ve ever read. Let me know if your interested!!!

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***JUST A FEW OF MY BOOK REVIEWS

Check out a few of the reviews for “A Family in Crisis the Story of Nessa” real reviews no tampering. I want those who have not read my first book to hear it from unbiased people that have… HOLLA… I’m so having fun!

5.0 out of 5 stars Five Stars, October 5, 2014
By patricia owens – See all my reviews
This review is from: A Family In Crisis The Story of Nessa (Paperback)
Great Book!
5.0 out of 5 stars Great story!, October 1, 2014

By Marilyn Johnson – See all my reviews
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This review is from: A Family In Crisis The Story of Nessa (Kindle Edition)
Wonderful read. The author’s technique of incorporating characters and plots is great. Style of writing is easy to follow but not elementary. Will definitely add Mr. Dasher to my collection.
5.0 out of 5 stars Mr. Dasher : Great job!!, August 22, 2014

By c. nakashian – See all my reviews
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This review is from: A Family In Crisis The Story of Nessa (Paperback)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this novel. Once I started reading, I couldn’t put it down. I can’t wait until the next book comes out so I can find out what happens! The unconventional format did not interfere at all with the story, in fact, it made the text flow.
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful
5.0 out of 5 stars An excellent story!, June 3, 2014

By Tracey Ennis – See all my reviews
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A well written story with a flare that keeps you wanting to turn the pages. The Story of Nessa has the excitement, drama, and heart felt moments that affects many families today. The characters came to life as the secrets begin to unfold.

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Another Excerpt from my soon to be released blockbuster….”SECRETS”

To the fans of “A family in Crisis the story of Nessa” and patiently awaiting the release of “SECRETS” here’s another little tidbit of whats to come! (ENJOY)… Now I’ve taken the names out, so to heighten the curiosity of some and not spoil it for others…Happy Reading… Let me set the scene for you: Nah!!! Just read it and tell me what you think!…….

She, in an even weaker state, talks directly to the paramedics ‘“No don’t move me, just let me be. I have a health directive in my pocketbook that says I don’t want life saving measures performed on me.” The paramedic reluctantly turns to her, he hated to say what by law he had to say. “I’m sorry sir/m’am she has the right to refuse treatment and she says she has a health directive. Our hands are tied.” She beckons him to come closer; “baby there’s some things I need you to know. I love you, you know that right?” He/she who is in tears answers, “ Yes mommy I know that but …” She continues, “ Then you know if I had just a little bit of my health there is nothing in the world I would not do to stay here with you, I’m tired baby your mommy been sick a long time and I don’t have no fight left. It took all my fight to stay here long enough for us to find each other. It time to say goodbye but first I want you to promise me something. He’s/she’s crying, “Anything mommy, anything.” She starts coughing once she stops she says “ I want you to try and find your father!” Between tears and no longer crying his response is “My father why would I want to find him! I tracked you down mommy because I knew you were sick, and was not able to look for me, is he sick too mommy?” “ No baby he’s not but you have to understand our parents made us give you up, they thought me and you would be an embarrassment to the family because of both families status in the community. So his family took him overseas and my family moved a couple of times. So he did not know who you were, what you look like or anything, please give him a chance there’s more to the story baby than you know, so promise me please (cough cough cough) promise me you’ll try to find him.” “I will mommy I will. Mommy please we could have been to the hospital by now, please let me take you to the hospital.” She is speaking barely above a whisper “No baby is the time very near, let me say bye to her/him, come here baby!” She takes a couple of deep breaths her breathing is getting more and more shallow, suddenly two figures appear, they catch her eyes and gestures to her, to see if they could come towards her!!!

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Just my thoughts!!!

Have u ever watch something and I said I can do that or what I have is just as good or better if only……..fill in the blank. Well I’m watching this show on television and I’m like Nessa is just as good. I so want my screenplay to be a tv show but it seems like it’s. going to be a movie. Pls don’t get me wrong I’ll be grateful for either, (So So Close) anyway Nessa has so many ups and downs, twist and turns the type of show where ur u can’t figure what the heck is going on and u can’t help but align urself with the characters. You find urself yelling, crying, throwing things experiencing such a range of emotions that ur like hold on this is a TV show that’s how close to real life A Family in Crisis, Nessa, Secrets, The Truth and Redemption is to your personal life. Please consider giving my 2nd Novel “Secrets” a chance. The more buzz we create the better chance a TV network will notice and scoop Nessa up before a movie company makes me an offer I just can’t refuse.
Happy Sunday…Heavy Out

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Excerpt from my soon to be released 2nd Novel, A Family in Crisis “SECRETS”

Good happy Saturday morning here’s a little snippet of my soon to be released 2nd novel, A Family in Crisis, “SECRETS!!!” …Happy Reading… let me set the scene for you. Carl and Uncle Jordan are on the way to deal with Uncle Joe who they believed has molested Nessa! Rachel Uncle Jordan’s wife decides to call Lisa Nessa’s mother who decided involved Uncle Jordan! (Enjoy)……. Rachel, please tell me everything is okay. I can’t tell you everything is okay Lisa, because I don’t really know what the hell is going on! Would you care to enlighten me (sarcastically)? Sure Rachel, I can do that (equally as sarcastic) I found out that my brother may have been inappropriate with Nessa and Carl was on the way to his house to confront him, so I asked Jordan if he could stop him.
Dammit Lisa do you give a damn about anyone but yourself! You actually think Jordan went to stop him. Come on Lisa, you know him better than that, Jordan did not go to stop him, he went shoot Joe himself! Lisa has this flabbergast look on her face, “He’s going to do what?” No Rachel that’s not possible, I would never. You’ve got to believe me, I didn’t call Jordan for him to do something to Joe, I called Jordan to be the voice of reason in an emotional situation, which is what he’s good at. You know that yourself.
If Lisa could see Rachel, she would have seen a face that said your full of shit Lisa, instead Rachel says regardless of all that you just said Lisa, my husband is probably going to jail, because you called him knowing how he feels about those kids. You should have known there was a possibility that Jordan would respond that way, when it has something to do with harming a child! Why would you do this to him Lisa? You know he is not going to say no to anything you ask him to do, especially as it pertains to the kids. So now, Jordan has a gun and is on the way to Joe’s house. I’m sorry you lost your husband I really am. I loved Mac too, but I don’t want to lose my husband Lisa, especially to a situation the police should be handling in the first place. What were you thinking about Lisa! What am I supposed to tell my kids, if their father goes to jail or worse he is shot and killed? Tell me Lisa what am I supposed to say to them! I have tried to be as patient and understanding as any woman in my situation could possibly be, but now I’m over it! I want you to hear me clearly, stop calling my husband for every situation you and your kids get into. (sarcastic tone) If you love him like you say you do, supposedly as a brother, allow him to participate in his own family lives, we need him too Lisa! (Voice starts to trail off) We need him too, (crying) I can’t lose my husband over your bullshit Lisa, I just can’t! Lisa: stunned and hurt by Rachel’s words responds with, I’m sorry Rachel, one, I didn’t know you felt this way and two, I never meant to cause you or your family any heartache. I guess I didn’t realize how much I started to depend on Jordan, but you have to know I would never intentionally put Jordan in harm’s way. I love Jordan, I’ve known him since I was four years old, which by the way is longer than you, but I’ll tell you what Rachel, I won’t bother your precious little husband anymore and that’s a promise. You might want to make him aware of your request, because it ain’t just me calling him, if you know what I mean! Rachel on the other end of the phone is offended by Lisa’s defensive and disrespectful tone, comes back with thank you very much Lisa, goodbye and call disconnects. Lisa unaware that Rachel has ended the call replies in a sarcastic tone, your very welcomed Mrs. Jordan and slams the phone down on Nessa’s bed. Nessa grabs the phone and says Jesus mom, what have you done now!

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“SECRETS” COMING SOON TO AN AMAZON STORE NEAR YOU

Hey ya’ll some of the questions people had after reading “A Family in Crisis the Story of Nessa,was 1: (Whose the father of Nessa’s baby!) Well the answer to that questions is going to leave you in shock. 2: (What happens between Anna and Andre?) the answer is a story for the ages.3. (Does Lisa tell her kids they have a sibling?) The correct answer is no but that’s not where the story ends. 4:(Did Uncle Joe molest Nessa?)Well after reading Secrets your going to think he did but then your going to think he didn’t. The final answer might end up being a little yes a little no. 5: (Is there something going on between Lisa and Uncle Jordan?) the answer is Rachel thinks so and you have to wonder if there marriage will survive! 6:(Is Andre going to get sick from HIV virus?)Someone is going to Die!!! 7: (Did Carl shoot Uncle Joe) Shots are definitely fired at his head. Also you have four new character to add to the drama. One will bring you to tears. One will make your real angry. One will disappoint you and make you angry. and one you will feel sorry for. Get ready folks Secrets will leave you with wiping tears from your eyes, your mouth will hang open and you will wonder what the hell could possibly be next and part 3 is “The Truth and its better than “Nessa” and “Secrets” If I missed any of your questions pls let me know!!!

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